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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:06 pm

i wander in not knowing whats going on i have no name i dont know how old i am and i know nothing accept i lost my mom and dad in a bandit raid.two leggeds stole my mom and dad and rod off into the sunset with my foal friends trailing behind.being pull by string things attached to things the two leggeds were on on my mom and dad.i neighed to them and they neighed back looking at me.i was stuck in a corral that was broken on the top.i couldnt jump it i was to small.i slept that night.falling asleep to the sound of cold rain beating on me and my tears.i wept the next morning i woke up a big horse stood in front of me i looked at the fence as i stood up.its was broken fully.i looked at the horse as he looked at me with gentle eyes he looked at the fence i ran and jumped over it. i ran searching for my parents i stopped and tried water and grass.!!!!GROSS!!!but i had to eat.i ate it and finally got used to its taste.i simply had one problem.my parents were gone and i had no idea where they were.i am a Trakehner.and in search for my parents.I have no name.Soon i realized the horse was fallowing me.i look back and keep going knowing this stallion is friendly.or so i thought.he was a beautiful color a color almost not known to man..i was mezmorized by his gleaming coat in the sun.but i kept going.



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THE FRIENDLY HORSE(SHOGUN):

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:25 pm

I run up to the stallion asking him what happened to this foal's mother.


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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:29 pm

SHOGUN:"i i dont know.i helped him get out.i believe his parents got taken in a bandit raid.i helped him out hes been searching for hours now...i dont know im here just to protect him.i think hes only 4 months.he doesnt have a name either"i say sadly.
COLT:i stop and look back at the stallion i see another horse.i stand there staring at the to horses.

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:41 pm

"I wonder who his parents were. That's so sad, I meen, he doesn't even have a name...."

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:45 pm

SHOGUN:"it truly is"i say sighing"i wan to be his father but..."
COLT:i try to read the horses lips but cant i stand the cowering scared.lost sad...what do i do?

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:49 pm

"But what?"

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:52 pm

SHOGUN:"i dont have a mare...and i dont think the foal will trust me without a mare."i look at the foal.
COLT:i begin walking close to the mare and stallion."who who who are you guys"i cower saying scared/

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:56 pm

"well, We might be your parents if he aggrees" I say sorta asking to be his mare.

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:02 pm

SHOGUN:"well then thats it,we are yyour parents kid..."i smile at the foal
COLT:"i dont want you guys to be my parents i have parents!"i scream and gallop off.
SHOGUN:"dammit!"i shout."kid get back here!"i dart after him.

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:04 pm

" We better hope he didn't go far!"
I say runnning after him and the foal.

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:20 pm

SHogun:i keep galloping.
COLT:i hide under a cave rock thing.i breath heavy

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:26 pm

"Were is he?" i wonder
(she doesn't know were he is.)

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:31 pm

SHOGUN:i stop and look around."i dont know"i

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:34 pm

*she spots him* "over here" I say whispering, trying not to scare him again

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:37 pm

SHOGUN:i look around not seeing anything.
COLT:i scream-"get away from me!"i start kicking with my front legs as the mare closes in

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:38 pm

"shhhh" I say trying to calm him

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:40 pm

SHOGUN:i stand there
COLT:i kick and kick hitting you in the front legs."get away"i scream

(check RAIN NEEDS A GENTLEMAN)

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:42 pm

"ok,ok" I say surprised at how frightened he is

(I did)

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Post by Guest on Tue Feb 10, 2009 3:53 pm

SHOGUN:i stand still not wanting to scare the foal more.
COLT:"get away away away i tell you get away!!!!!!!!!!!"i scream again.kicking my front feet i squize between the mares legs and run out from under her.i gallop off.
SHOGUN:i sprint after him.at first i didnt notice he left until i saw dust rumbling up."fast lil fella,eh?"i smile and keep sprinting.

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Post by Guest on Tue Feb 10, 2009 4:59 pm

"yeah" I say sprinting in unison with him.

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Post by Guest on Tue Feb 10, 2009 10:21 pm

SHOGUN:i keep galloping
COLT:i think-i need to go faster-i sprint.going faster then every.next thing i know my feet are falling under me.i trip twisting my front leg.i tumble in into a pond.i begin drowning my front leg bleeding i look at it and the bone is popping out.i think of my last moments i had with my family.

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Post by Guest on Thu Feb 12, 2009 3:51 pm

I gallop faster, seeing the poor foal drowning.

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Post by Guest on Thu Feb 12, 2009 4:05 pm

SHOGUN:i speed up going faster than ever.i gallop and grab the foals NOT hurt leg.i pull him out.
COLT:i lay motionless

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:10 am

I sniff the foal, searching for a sign that there is life in him.

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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 16, 2009 4:28 pm

COLT:i cough up some water and start to struggle to get up to get away from them."get away from me"i start to kick
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i back up."shhhh"i smile."its ok little buddy"

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