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Condemned Shadow -- Tame The Beast ( Faes Please )

Post by Guest on Sun Mar 06, 2011 5:47 pm

Name: Condemned Shadow
Nickname: Shadow; Shady
Age: 4 years
Breed: Mexican Wolf
History: Long and brutal. He was trained as an assassin wolf in his old pack, but is trying to get over that stage.
Personality: He is trying to curve his absolutely horrid temper and bad attitude. He doesn't trust easily and is hard to get used to. He can be harsh, but claims it's only the truth. And that the truth hurts.
Can you Tame The Beast?
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Condemned Shadow walked along the treeline quietly. He had been trained to be quiet ever since he was trained to be an assassin. He was still trying to curve his reflex to lash out. Before he had been an assassin, he had wanted a good life, a wonderful family, and a home to call his own. He yawned, closing his jaw without a sound. He was here now....Well, he didn't know. He'd never met a fae that could keep up with him anymore. After Larka and he had split up, he hadn't been able to be patient with faes. It just wasn't this 'thing,' as Larka had put it. He growled lowly and crouched down. A deer grazed merely ten feet in front of him. He waited for a moment, when the deer turned its head away from him, and lunged. He dug his claws into the deer's rump, but the deer bucked, flinging him off. He pursued the deer in chase. He was only slightly lucky. If the deer hadn't stumbled, he never would've caught it. When the deer stumbled, he reached out with his forelegs and caught the deer's leg, pulling it down. Instantly he was on top of the deer, ripping its throat out without a sound. The deer didn't even have time to make a noise, either. He went to the deer's stomach and began tearing flesh out eagerly, eating it hungrily.

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Re: Condemned Shadow -- Tame The Beast ( Faes Please )

Post by Soul Hunter on Mon Mar 07, 2011 12:48 pm

I walked through the forest a three year old lone Kerla. My former pack were a pack that specialised in assassination so I was taught from a pup but I kept it, unlike some other packs that did the same it was more like they only trained if we wanted to be trained so it was gentle and they never pushed us too much. Although I had a small stature compared to other wolves and because of that I had to learn how to defend myself otherwise like my mother I wouldn’t be able to live on my own considering my pack was now destroyed.
I had a tri-colour coat of white, reddish brown and light brown along with a pair of green eyes. My small stature made it easier for me to move as well and I had been a Kerla for about 1 and a half years now since my back were destroyed…
My parents gav eme the name BiteMarked and I had two twin sisters both of who were pure white unlike me and were normal sized faes...
I lifted my head to the smell of deer blood and went over staying quiet and hiding myself well

ooc- Kerla is a female lone wolf… Kerl is a lone wolf
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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 07, 2011 12:57 pm

Shadow lifted his head. He flicked his ears back carefully and scanned the area. If another wolf tried to steal his kill.....Well, they might be on the menu as well. Shadow didn't usually eat other wolves -- actually, he never had before, but in his mid, he wouldn't mind trying if they tried to steal his original dinner. He howled, warning all other wolves to stay away from his kill unti he had finished his fill. He whipped his head around and snapped at the air, jaws clamping down hard and sending an eerie echo into the forest. He turned back to his deer and ate some more.

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Post by Soul Hunter on Mon Mar 07, 2011 1:02 pm

I flinched slightly when he snapped close to me but did not move the slightest, more like I was surprised to meet a wolf with such a temper 'Hmm such a temper it might be best to wait until his finished at least.' I thought and stayed down for a bit before standing and backing of slowly careful of where I placed my feet so I did not alert him hoping that I would not snap a twig...
My ears flickered slightly and I kept my tail to one side of me so I did not trip over it.I snapped a twig beneath my paw and jumped

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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 07, 2011 1:07 pm

Shadow's ears flicked back and forth. He felt like he wasn't alone. He had gained that abillity when he had been through the harsh training of becoming an assassin. He finished his food the lifted his head to let out a long howl, telling other wolves that he was done with his meal and leaving it for the hungry. He growled lowly as his eyes wandered back to the spot where he had felt the strange, foreign eyes staring at him. He couldn't be sure anybody was there, and he wasn't going to risk threatening nothing. He sat at the edge of the tiny clearing, only big enough for two grown brutes and one small doe, like the one he had just eaten. He sat down at the edge of the clearing, the reddish coloring and browns rippled under the sunlight. He was alert. Nothing got past his meal without him examining them first. If they looked healthy and fit, he would not allow them to eat. If they looked hungry and weak, he'd let them eat. He had a pinch of generosity in him still. But most of that had been washed away after his training to be an assassin.

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Post by Soul Hunter on Mon Mar 07, 2011 1:16 pm

I heard the howl and pricked up, I hadn't been able to get a good kill in a while thanks to my two sisters hogging all the meat...I whimpered slightly upset with myself for having to resort to this and followed the scent of the deer until I was at the otherside of the clearing and carefully walked through with my head low... I looked at the brute and could tell he used to be an assassin but was most likely trained differently.. my training wasn't as harsh. I lay down by some bits of meat and began eating silently hopeing my sister wouldn't find me since i left them with another pack... they were the same age but completely different and just got on my nerves sometimes...
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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:10 pm

Shadow examined the fae. She didn't look like she was in very good health. He gave a very brief smile and stood up. "Hello," he said in his deep, manly voice. "I am Condemned Shadow," he never gave away the fact he had once been an assassin. Usually people couldn't guess. But that was usually. Not everybody was ' usually. ' "But you may call me Shadow. Tell me, fae, why are you so thin?" He asked. He had a habit of getting into other people's business, but his aura was irresistable, and most faes got weak knees by just staring at him, let alone hearing his voice. It was comforting with a harsh edge. Like the beauty of a rose, protected by sharp thorns on the stem.

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Post by Soul Hunter on Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:17 pm

I lifted my head and licked my muzzle.. "My name is not Fae it's BiteMarked from the Winterpaw tribe as for why I'm so thin, being the runt of the litter never serves anyone well despite their skills... my sisters basically kept taking my kill since they are average height and have more streangth than me ,so I never got a chance to eat and just got tired" I said standing up I was a lot smaller than the average Fae which was why i was the runt of the litter.. i soon lay back down.."You can call me Bite for short" I said...I could already tell what he was.. Since i was one it was only natural to be able to tell if another wolf was an assassin as well.. although because of my small stature I did not look like one at all...My sisters were stronger yes but my speed and stamina were higher than an average wolf's because i didn't use up as much energy and i also knew which were the qucikest ways to defend myself although i could never use them on my sisters...

(i g2g bye bye, i'll reply back when i get a chance though so please still reply)
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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:24 pm

( okay! )

Shadow looked her over. "You seem familiar, but I'm probably just seeing things." He smiled gently. "Eat your fill. I'll be roaming around here. If anybody causes you trouble, call, and I'll come. Remember this is my kill you're eating," he snarled the last sentence violently. "I'll protect any food I get violently. This is my first kill in two weeks." He said. "I choose to keep my diet to a small amount. It has to do with my past." He walked around the edges of the clearing.

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Post by Soul Hunter on Mon Mar 07, 2011 11:37 pm

"Thank you" I said nodding my head slightly and kept eating before growling slightly to myself..."shesh for a former assassin he has a very bad temper" I muttered and stood up moving to where there were some other small scraps and ate them before I soon finished and yawned slightly sitting down
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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 08, 2011 2:54 pm

Shadow flicked up his ears and sat at the edge of the camp. A twig cracked somewhere in the black forest and he growled and pinned his ears. But he wasn't planning on going anywhere. He turned back to the fae and his kill, walking over. "Smells like bear. Nothing I can't handle. But you, maybe, should be running along now." He said. It was more of an order than a suggestion. He expected her to follow his orders -- there hadn't been a single fae to ever defy him. He didn't expect her to be any different. He had never met a fae that could keep up with him.

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Post by Soul Hunter on Tue Mar 08, 2011 2:57 pm

"don't order me around Mister" I said with a slight snap in my voice.. i didn't care who they were but i would not let anyone order me around"I do not plan to let anyone fight alone... you shouldn't base others on their looks" I said and waited sniffing the air and estimated a distance and melted into the shadows before i came up to the bear and growled standing in a strong stance and picked out the best place to attack... I pinned my ears back and lunged at the neck and growled as the bear tried to get me off but i kept hanging on and dug slowly into the windpipe
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Post by Guest on Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:41 pm

Angry, Shadow flung the fae off the bear and chased it off. "My intentions were not to kill it, merely make it flee. He won't mess with me again." He growled a fearsome growl and snapped only inches away from the fae's face. "Now. Go before I hurt you." He had actually taken a slight interest in her when she had disobeyed his commands. Make she could keep up with him. He would test her. He trotted away briskly through the dark forest.

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Post by Soul Hunter on Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:44 pm

i growled angrily and chased after him and stopped him angrily "you do not command those you just met and i have no intention of obeying anyone anymore, stupid assasin wolf" I growled at him my ears back and my eyes showed anger "you try being in my position" I said adn snapped at him only inches away..."and running away is cowardly as well, from what i learned, you should only run when you have no hope of winning and rethink or create a path for yourself to take through or around the danger"
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Post by Guest on Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:54 pm

"Yes. You're a danger to my sanity," He snapped and pinned her to the ground. "Maybe you don't take orders from others, but you will take orders from me. So help me, I'll break your neck!" He growled so loudly it was nearly a roar. He let go of her and began to stalk away, ears pinned.


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Post by Soul Hunter on Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:59 pm

"i will not jerk" I shouted..."I'll take no orders from anyone... sorry to disappoint brute" I said and grinned and pulled his ear harshly "Why are you such a Jerk anyway?"i asked and walked in the shadows quietly "and why do you want other to obey you? it won't get you anywhere in life" I said i had calmed down slightly


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Post by Guest on Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:02 pm

"As I said before, you're a danger to my sanity. If you won't obey orders, then you must not be a very good assassin." He snapped. "Now please. Why must you follow me?" His eyes twinkled for a short moment as he stared at her, but then he looked away, the sparkle fading. He had his ears pinned as he stopped and sat bolt upright. He released the tension in his ears and let them flick around here and there. "And I'm a jerk because I am." He said simply. Then he pondered a moment. "But I wasn't always this way. Also, what business of yours is it to know mine?"

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Post by Soul Hunter on Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:04 pm

"curiousity and a good assassin only follows orders from their pack, mine is destroyed which makes me a rouge assassin actually...and how am I a danger to your sanity?" I said "also i can do as i please so i don't have to follow your orders, answer your questions and i can go where i please" I said "and no one is born a jerk.. you jsut need to find that other part of yourself inside you, it's not easy though"i said
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Post by Guest on Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:29 pm

"You're dangerous to my sanity because you are plain obnoxious," he growled lowly. "And no, I didn't force my orders upon you. I would have, if I thought you were worth my time. I'm simply suggesting you follow them. It may turn out to be good for your health. And don't think you're all tough because you don't have a pack, either. You were talking about siblings. You have faes with you. You're not alone. Assassins are always alone. You're simply a fraud. I don't fall for your kind of ignorance." He got up and started stalking away again.

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Post by Soul Hunter on Wed Mar 09, 2011 11:25 pm

"i was with my siblings because if i'm not they'llget themselves killed.. unlike you, i was taught a different way... some assassins can work in small groups and as for a fraud isn't that going too far, stupid" i growled and heard one of my sisters and turned"see what i mean, my sisters are constantly getting into to trouble and from what I can tell you chased that bear right to my sisters" I said and turned and moved quickly going straight towards my sisters.. my ears pinned back adn i growled and my sisters howled "Fleura, Rosea!" i said and quickly moved goign to a sprint adn got there quickly and growled at the bear and showed my teeth and snapped warning it to back off...
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Post by Guest on Thu Mar 10, 2011 2:25 pm

Seeing this as a good oppurtinity to escape, Shadow quietly padded away, not leaving a single track or scent behind. He growled once they were out of sight and put his guard down, but kept up the barriers that helped him be alert even when his guard was up. He yawned and sat down behind a bush, completely hidden.

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Post by Soul Hunter on Thu Mar 10, 2011 2:30 pm

I attacked the bear and got it away form ymsisters and then turned and growled a them.. "why did you leave that pack? all you two do is cause trouble" I growled and they looked to each other.."your one to talk.. runt" "Oh just quit it, i have more fighting experance than you two put together..." I snapped and they both growled and pulled my ears and i yelped before snapping at them and then saw wolves from the pack they had both recently joined arrive and hid in the bushes since no pack really wanted me to join after the last incdent with the other pack i had been in since i stole their secret...
I quickly sprinted off when they saw me and found myself back in the shadows and smiled before I spotted a cliff edge and ran towards it and climbed up and lay in the cave and curled up inside quietly in a rather bad mood becuase of my sister... they just kept causing trouble which was why i had to constantly make sure they were with a pack and stayed there
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Post by Guest on Thu Mar 10, 2011 4:00 pm

Shadow's heart didn't contain the least bit of guilt. He had been alone for more than half of his life, now, and was completely used to being abandon. He let out a long howl, which contained the message, I'm ready to hunt, if anybody wishes to join me. He then fell silent, his voice trailing off. He thought he heard a wolf run past him. He smelled the air. Fae. He growled and followed the scent until the fae he had chatted with earlier appeared before him in his cave. "Don't you know it's rude to trespass?" He growled lowly, but made no attempt to harm her.

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Post by Soul Hunter on Thu Mar 10, 2011 11:11 pm

I snapped back "I'm sorry how was I supposed to know another wolf was here... shesh all the caves are taken in thhis area" I said and sat myself up and streatched..."and yes I do know.. i'm leaveing soon so don't bite your tail off"I said my ears were pinned back and i didn't sound like i was in the best of moods either...I yawned and stood up still rather annoyed
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Post by Guest on Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:58 pm

"Good," he nodded his head, giving her a quick glance. "Those pack members won't follow your scent, will they?" He asked, looking around as he heard shuffling from the bushes that surrounded his home. That could be anything, he tried to convince himself. Hell no, he wasn't scared, but he was tired and definately not in the mood to fight.

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