rain in heat,comes to find a mate (please reply)

rain~i walked out of the shadows of the trees.i trolted in and stoped in the middle of the meadow and looked all around me.i was in heat and looking for a mate.i stold there like a snake ready to strike.i left my tail up to let stallions now i was in heat.i held it up higher.i watched every stallion walk right passed me.some stallions were fighting.not even noticeing a mare in heat.so i wait untill a stallion seen me alone.

~Maverick~
I noticed the mare standing alone. I couldn't believe my eyes. I smelled the air I smelled a heat scent. Bingo! She was in heat! I walked over to her and asked " Hello, my name is Maverick, and yours is?" and bowed.

i bowed my head "rain."i said "nice to meet you."i said and i walked around him gazing into his eyes.(here is a pic)

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~Maverick~
"That's a beautiful name. Rain, I like it." I said while smiling and staring into her majestic eyes.

i stoped by his side and turned my head to look at maverick."thank you."i said and flicked my tail in his face.i smiled when i did.

~Maverick~
When she flicked her silky tail in my face it felt like electricity (i could't think up of anything else lol). "I smelled the air and picked up a heat scent. I smiled and started grazing still looking at her.

i smiled at him and nipped his side.

~Maverick~
I smiled and nipped back at her side. I think I knew where this was going.

i flick my tail telling him to follow me.

~Maverick~
I followed her, wondering where we were going.

~Maverick~
"So where are we going?" I asked as I nipped at her rump once.

i turned my head back quickly and smiled at him."we are going to the forest,where horses mate."

~Maverick~
I smiled and nipped at her hind legs and rump more. I was excited.

~Maverick~
"Are we almost there?" I asked... waiting at a moment like this was like waiting for years.

"yes."i said and went through the shadows of the trees.i stop and look behide me.

~Maverick~
I smiled, getting more and more excited by the second. I stayed cool though. I nipped up her spine in a sweet way.

i smiled at him and said "would you like to you know mate."

~Maverick~
"It would be my honor!" I said smiling and nipping at her neck, hind legs, and rump.

i smiled and tuned my rump towards him.i turned my head and nodded in agreement.

~Maverick~
I slowly nipped up her leg, then her rump, and mounted her. My tool sticked out and I gently pushed it into her, so she could get used to it. "Are you ready?" I asked.

i nod and i jumped at first and then relaxed my legs.i spreted my legs apart and resteaed my head in between my front legs.

~Maverick~
I pumped slow and then faster and harder.

i groaned and moaned when he started to pump in faster and harder.

I nuzzled her side for a moment and continued.

i turned my head around and nuzzled him back.i groaned when he started again.