Bury my soul (Forcer plz)

The sun went down behind the sandy mountain top. A beautiful wild horse was darting across the sand covered land. The dirt forming into a vast cloud of dust around its hooves. The figure was shaped like a mare, her name was 'Beautiful Remedy' The most beautiful mare of all. The sand flew everywhere as Beautiful Remedy took a step with her plated hooves. Her beautiful form was gleamming against the blazing hot sun. She stopped slowly, neighing loudly. Her body lifted to the air, as she let a foreleg strike out into mid-air at an unknown enemy.. She snroted and landed with a dull thud. She trolted around, bobbing her head up and down, letting ear pericing neighs out. She stopped at a patch of grass that surrounded a little creek, that was crystal blue, it sparkled as the sun beamed down upon it. She shoke her head, her mane falling like a vielot water fall over her face. Her eyes her a bright purple, beautfiul as the summer flowers. She snorted, lifting a hoof to let it rest by her muzzle.. She sneezed and looked at the sparkling water. She dipped her muzzle in, gulping down refreshing water. As seh drank ehr fill, she felt something run across her muzzle. She snorted and threw her head up stumbling back. She neighed loudly and reared slashing in the water. The water scattered everywhere around Remedy. She shoke ehr head and pawed at the water top, bobbing ehr head up and down. She snorted and turned away form the creek adn trolted off.

As she stopped to graze, she pricked her ears froward to hear a stallion trolt up. She threw her head up pinning ehr ears intantly to her cranium tightly. She sneered in fury. She begna to bobb her head telling the stallion not to come any closer. She pawed the ground feriously. She snorted. Snaking her head up hgih and letting a loud ear percing neigh flow out of her maw. She striked out at the stallion. Then, landing with a dull thud... " Back away brute!" She snapped in mid-air in fury...

Her eyes went bloodshot red. She growled and reared striking out at him. She bucked him in the chest wildly. She nipped his neck and tore flesh off. She backed her rump into a tree, pinning ehr tail to her rump. She snorted bobbing her head up and down. She pawed the gorund her sharp hooves striking the ground... " STAY BACK!" She snapped viciously... She would not let this stud take advantage of ehr, she wll fight until her very last bretah if she had to. But this stud was not gonna get into her....

As he licked her muzzl, she neighed loudly, snaking her head up the rearing and bolting her hooves on his shoudler blade. Scrapping his shoudler. She snorted and charged at him, slamming him his chest and making him fall to the gorund. " DONT TOUCH ME!" Remedy snapped. Se backed away intot eh tree again. Her muscles mvoed prefectly under her beautiful coat. Her eyes began to go pure white. Which means stay back or you will die within an instant. She does not play around. She stomped her hoof and pawed at the ground, dirt flying up she snorted shaking her head...

Remedy snorted, snapping ehr maw. But she soon gave up and settled down. She stood there, letting him do his thing. But if he got anywhere near her rump...

(Yea sure!(

Remedy trned to see another stallion. How many stallions do i attract! She throught. She snroted and and stood there watching the two stallions...

She pawed the ground anger filling her eyes. It seemed hot steam was blowing out of ehr ears right now. She kept pawing the ground, tearing it apart beneath her. She shoke ehr ehad awya from him as he wispered into his ear. " Get away!" She snapped, Remedy is not an easy mare to get along with, she is ruthless to forcers. Adn all who dare stand and threaten her.

She snapped at them both, tearing alittle of flesh off their shoulders. " STOP! THIS IMMATURE BEHAVIOR THIS INSTANT!!!" She roared. Stoming a hoof to find herself between them. " You both can stay. But i WANT NO fighting!" She snapped nipping at them both. She snaked ehr head up to hold her head high.

She nodded her head. She started to graze, her head hung low to the earth. She moved one of her front hooves with her head still low to the earth. She just stood there to and grazed as her tail whiped the sides of ehr rump scare the flys away...

Remedy sighed and turned to looka t the new stallion " I'm Beautiful Remedy. Who are you?" She asked standing by the tree. Grazing again. She snorted shaking ehr mane. She looked up her knees buckled and she crumbeld to the ground, laying down in a grunt. She sighed deeply and ate soem grass while she lay there...

~Steel Magnolias~
"I'm Steel Magnolias, nice to properly meet you." I got up and decided to leave so the stallion wouldn't kill me. "Actually, I have to go. I'm so sorry...." I ran off.


(Sorry, he's not a forcer, so I ended it.)