Thundercloud is evil...

Red willow-
She snorted and walked in tail free and held high.Head held high as I walked in and went to cherry trees and started to eat some before I herd a Voice murmur something.I swung my head to his direction and saw him.His mussels were big and he was tall and strong.It sent chills down my spine and I stared at him before speaking"H-hello?"I said with my heat sent leaving me.I then slightly pinned my tail but you could still get it out of the way if wanted."I-I'm R-red W-willow."I stuttered.

I smiled and thought*Ok he's obviously not a forcer.*I then took a few steps closer to him.I was only 4 feet away."Yes they are."My tail was free in the wind and my main was up and so was my forelock.I then playfully and gently reached for his fore lock and polled on it.I stepped closer now only.3 feet away.I then reach for a cherry and grab it then ate it.I smiled at him and started to graze right in front of him.

I screamed in pain but before I could nip him he grabbed my main making it wear I could not nip or speak.After awhile of struggling I gave up and stood there knowing if I struggled I would only get hurt for he was very havely compared to me.After a little while latter I realised that it felt some what good and my body was liking it so much it caused me to moan.

(He finished cuz I anit in a mood... lolz)

Most forcer forced the mare to stay with them but not this time.I then trued and chased after him"O no you don't."I Hollered to him as I caught up with him and trued in front of him,"Look mister you have to help me with this foal weather you like it or not."I stood in front of him ears back and in rage.I looked deep into his eye for hi showed crrulnes and mine showed fear.

She snorted and reared,"Well then find some one who will then............................Jack ass."She said and landed giving him a madder then hell look,"O ferget it go be a Jackass some were else forcer."She said and trued running through bushes not noticing they were thorn bushes.She kept going through them.There was at least 20 of them one way and 10 of them the other and they were in a box like shape and every ware.Once she went trough she felt needles in her and looked at her.There was massive ones stuck in her*O no will the foal make it?*She wonder then felt a kick and felt relived about that and slowly started taking them all out flinching every time.She then had them all out and walked forward till found a safe grassy area and laid down and breathed heavily.She screamed in pain as she pooshed the 1st time and the seacent and third.She bereaved heavily and to a 2 minuet brake and pushed once,2,3,4,5 times and screamed while doing so.The foal was now hafe out.She then pushed once,2,3,4,5,6,7 while screaming she then stopped the foal was out and trieing to stand while the birth sack(Don't know what it is called)Was still on and he was getting tangled around the Imbelitcule cord.I screamed in pain as he instead of breaking it pulled on it making us both hurt.I then felt him struggle more but this time herd a small snap and he was free but I lid there flat on the ground in pain.I couldn't lift my head for 3 minits then lifted it and watched him try to stand but when I tried I couldn't*Grate*I thought and kept trying over and over till living on my side.I watched as the foal made it to his feet and stumble around falling down over and over and getting farther and farther away.I nickered to him trying to get up then gasped *IF I DON'T GET UP IN TIME!*I thought not wanting to think of the possibly thing to happen as a wolf apaered,I then let out a ear piercing neigh that hit the trees and bounced off and echoed for miles before was standing I was about to take a step before fell and a little of the actess stuff came out making it easer to move but man was I in pain,"Help!"I Hollered and got the wolfs attention for only a moment.........

"What?!.....What about me?!" I said and tried to stand up and this time mad it to my feet and slowly walked around letting the access stuff fell out of me.I then turned and ran to the foal and watched the wolf run off.I stated cleaning my son but felt a bit weak.I then nugged him to a tree and lied down and he fell down.I smiled and spoke,"It's ok."I said and lad my head down and stayed that way for five minits till felt my straight aging.I then stood and helped him up.I chuckled as he stumbled one way and fell and did this other and other till stand and walking to me while his legs were shaking.He then started to nurse and I smiled.After that I looked to you and snorted,"Come along son."I said head held high and eyes strati acting as if I could not see his father but could not help to laugh as he ran a head of me and accidently his back end went up into the air and he ended up walking on two legs before falling.I then trotted towards him looking at him the hole time as he fell on his head.I helped him up then started to walk not even thanking the stud for saving him gust nudging him along the path we were taking,"Hmm what could I call you?"I said looking down at him and he said his 1st words"Bolt."I smiled,"Bolt hmm Lightning bolt!"I shouted knowing thunder bolt would make more seans then the name I gave him.We counted to walk till next to a lake that was in are path and being a animal mom a knew I had to be some what hard on him cause only the strongest could live.I then plunged into the water and swam slowly to the other side.He then plunged and struggled at 1st but then fingered it out and swam hafe way before tiring.I then plunged back in and gently pooshed him up wards so he was above the water aging in stead of below.I then walked on to the land and shook me self and watched him fallow and repeat me.I smiled and started to graze and he started to eat he we now 1 hower and 10 minets old and we were a hower worth of time away from his father.

(I'm bout to go.)

I sighed I knew I needed a stud or a mare's help,I nickered a loud neigh and waited for some one to come.
Foal picture-

(Sorry it took so long)

(Should I add someone new?)

(I don't care............. )

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(Okay... in a min. Hey, do you wanna make a topic while I think?)

(Ok.......does thunder come in it?)