The poem of goodbye (work in progress!)

As my life slowly fades away,
You stand over me and pray,
Pray that I will stay alive,
But you know that death,
is like a crime.

You see the gun lying limp in my hand,
As I lie lifeless on the sand,
The big blue waves snap at my shirt,
as the blood soaks into the dirt.

as the sun sets,
over the sea,
you bow your head sadly,
over me,
a smile frozen on my face,
keeps the beach beautiful,
with all its grace.

So don't give up!
you still have hope!
Don't let your confidence,
sail away from you on a boat!
As you soon start to see,
You are still a part of me....