Moon comes

Moon:
*i come in and nicker i flick my tail releasing scent*

"I walk in the meadow and look at the moon, tears in my eyes





as a foal

warrioir gallops in flexing his muscles and bowing,"i smell a scent would you like to be mates" his coat gleamed inthe sun and his mane swayed in the breese he stared at her admiring her beuaty and ellegance.
(could they be mates do you have a pic)

I look at the other stallion, and looked at moon, then galloped over to her "Hello, or you could be mine, if you want, i meen not to come fast at you but...." He trails on nervousley

he walks imbetween the new stalloin and moon and barres his teeth "im willing to fight for her to show my love for her"

*Looks at both stallions and lowers head* I dont want to be either of your mates if this nonsense is going to carry on *snorts and pushes the stallions out of my way and stands in front of them*

ok yeah maybe she should choose he rubbs her neck and bows "im sorry"

*Snorts* Its fine,just dont let it happen again!First i need to get too know you guys before i go with any one of you*Flicks tail,releasing scent*

*sniffs in the air and says "iv never had a mate or someone close to me my mother died while birth and my father was killed

Ok,well that is juat a little about you,not a lot*Snorts and flicks tail*

"love to play usually im not rude will do anything to protect my mate"winnies and rubs her neck

*Shakes mane* I mean,i want to get to know you by being around you*Snorts*

well ok he gallops over to the stream and rolls in the mudd playfully"come on over its nice"

(your forgetting to use quotes when u talk!)

*Nickers and tosses mane* I dont roll in mud,i am way more sophisticated*looks at you*

I look up at the moon again and head back to the forest

*Looks over at the arabian* Finally you reply*laughs and smiles then walks over to you and nudges you* Stay,please?*smiles*

(The dianna person is too fast)

"sorry i diddnt mean to be fast"he lowers his head in dissapointment and starts to trot off to the stream

(Ya,you just walk in,and go,want to be mates,thats not how ur suppose to play,because most of the time,we will say no...but anyways)

Its ok*Smiles at The Arabian* What are you guys names? *ask both of them* My Name Is Moonlight Money Maker,moon for short*smiles*

my name is soldier what a pretty name for a lady

(sorry i forgot quotes)

(try not to foget any more,its confusing)
*Smiles* Thank you

*lowers his head and starts to chase a butterfly then he glances back at her*

*Lays down and rolls in grass,boredly*

*he nips at her mane trying to entertain her*

"Aleque" I bow my head to her, then I walk back over