Baley wanders a little to far

Baley raised her head and pricked her ears at the sound of a distant neigh, she snorted and scanned the horizon for any signs of another horse. It sounded like the horse was pretty far away, so Baley wasn't bothered. She flicked her tail and kept walking cursing at the rocks where her foot slipped and she fell bruising the front of her leg. She was not built for such a treck on the mountains she looked around again hoping to find her way back to the herd. She heard a neigh again, a stallion. She pinned her ears the sound was closer, and Baley was tought that stray stallions are dangerous and you should stay away from them. She raised her head and neighed loudly back her voice echoing through the rocks, her neigh kind of a warning but her stress and worry was not masked in it. She lowered her head and took another step and winced as her bruised leg stepped on another rock.1

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My ears flickered at the responding neigh, hearing the warning in it. But it was strained, a mare's by the pitch and tone, and it sounded like she might be lost or something. Tossing my head, I began my way down the slope, sending rocks tumbling and rolling. Once I reached the bottom I lifted up into a free, long-strided trot, a gait I could keep up for hours, even days if needed, on end. My nostrils flared as I scented the area surrounding me, but there was no sign of the horse, and I wasn't sure if I was even travelling in the right direction. Hesitantly, I sucked in a deep breath of air, letting it out in a shrill whinny, ears half back, listening to the sounds around me as I slowed.

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Baley stopped once more when she heard the whine, it sounded much closer. She became nervous as she started to quicken her pace through the rocks. Nearing the edge she lost her footing and fell to her knee's letting out a shrill whine as the rocks beneath her crumbled she quickly stood up and pressed herself to the side of the small cliff she looked down at her knee's which were now not just bruised, but torn and bloody she lowered her head and let out a struggled breath she looked around completly lost now she let out another neigh quieter this time since she didn't have the energy for it

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I stopped, ears swivelling as I heard another whinny, then a quieter one after that. Stepping forward again almost hesitantly, I made my way towards the calls. Finally I could take in the cliff and scattered rocks, along with the mare pressed up against the cliff. I hesitated again, almost afraid to approach her.

Baley scented the stallion behind her and turned her head quickly to look at him. Her brown eyes nervous, scared and in pain she pressed her ears against her head worried about what he might do to her she pressed herself against the wall more wishing she was back in her herd she turned slightly so that she was facing him. Her knee's wobbily from the fall and she cringed every time she took a step

~Smoky
I snorted softly, taking a hesitant step towards her. I could tell she was nervous and I wanted to help, but I didn't know how she would respond. Tossing my head, I paused a moment before walking forward again, slowly, head lowered, ears tipped forward.

Baley started to relax knowing that the stallion wasn't going to hurt her, she took a step away from the cliff watching a few more rocks crumble. She turned to the stallion "I seem to be a little lost" she said quietly her sweet voice shaking horribly as she was nervous and scared of the territory around her.

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