Will I regret this? (Twisted)

Star peered out the window, tail tip flicking. She longed to be outside, in the cool wind and drinking fresh water. She heard her girl downstairs, getting ready to go n her daily adventure. Star raced downstairs, rubbing against her leg. "No. I will not have you eating rodents." She said. "Let her go out." The mom upwalker said. "Alright." She growled, letting Star out.


Star raced away, ignoring the cries of her girl. "She will be back." The big upwalker said. The truth was, Star hated her, she hut her, never let have any freedom, and constantly made her wear stupid pieces of cloth. The she-cat cleared the small stream easilym racing away as far as she could.

Soon, she caught the scent of a mouse, and lowered herself to the ground. "This will be easy." Star laughed, moving forward. She lept, muscles uncoiling and launching her high. The mouse easily escaped, sending Star tumbling into the brush.

Star tried again and again, and soon found and injured squirrel. She leaped, her paw landed on its tal and her teeth sank into the back of its neck, killing it.

Pinepaw high in the air and landed perfectly ontop of it. He bit it's neck and killed it instantly. Picking it up, he sniffed the air once more then smelt a weird scent. He reconized the scent. The horrible scent of a kittypet. Slowly, he prowled towards the cat that trespassed the Solarclan territory and wiggled his haunches when he saw the she-cat. He then jumped up yowling, his meal now out his mouth and landed on her, scratching her back and hissing in rage. Then finally, he got a grip and put her down, eyes narrowed.

He couldn't believe kittypets, he never did! They were disgusting! They ate food pellets that looked like animal dropplings, they were soft, at least most were. They purred too much, and were unlucky cat. Glad to be clan born, Pinepaw hated to think of being as a soft kittypets. Living with two-legs! Ugh. He'd claw their faces if they tried to touch him. They looked weird and talked weird were no fur and always were walking around funny. They drove monsters, and they were cruel to the world. Stupid, didn't have the brains like a cat did. But Pinepaw was not all that judgemental for he heard stories of the great Firestar from Thunderclan. Being a kittypet, turning into a apprentice all the way to a leader. Wow! He wanted to be a leader all cats could look up to.



[That's how he looks]

Star let out a yowl when she felt the claws on her back, and hissed when she saw the Tom on top of her. "Get off me you worthless fur ball!" She snapped, clawing his shoulder and slipped out from under him. "Why did you attack me?!" Star demanded, licking the wound on her own back. "I was only hunting! A first time thing for me! And then you come along and do this." Star picked the squirrel up, fur bristling.

Her mind was raging. She had smelled no boundaries. And he just came along and attacked her!

(Braindead)

Pinepaw landed on all four paws and didn't answer. He had to chase her out of the bounderies first! He yowled and snarled. "Go back to your two-legs kittypets, or else you'll come back as crow-food." he threatned.

[sorry so short. on my stinkin wii for awhile.]

(It is ok)

"I don't want to go back to them! They hurt me and never let me have any freedom! And they're called Upwalkers." Star said. She was willing to fight, but knew she would lose. "Just leave me alone!"

Pinepaw yowled in rage and jumped at the she-cat and pinned her down. "Listen," he meowed in distredd. "Unless you want to get your fur ripped off by my leader, I sugjest you get of Thunderclan territory!" he hissed. Didn't this kittypet see he was trying to help her leave? He already knew this she-cat wasn't fit enough to be tookn back to camp. Maybe? It looked like she would've put up a fight if she had to. He thought for second. He got off her and shook his pelt. "Look here, i,'ll let you off a warning."

I meant Solarclan

"And stay where the upwalkers can catch me? No way!" She said, flashing around to the back of him and swiping his back legs out with her paw. He was on his back in a few seconds after that, a raging kitty pet on top of him. "I'm not a tame cat anymore. I don't want to be." Star got off. "What Leader? You are a cat..... Wait, you mean, you guys are true? The Clan cats are true?" Her amber eyes lit up, and her fur laid down again.

Pinepaw stood up and shook his pelt and rolled his eyes at the she-cat. "Of course it is you stupid furball!" he growled. He started to lick himself quickly, getting anything out of his fur.

"I'm sorry I was kept inside all my life. Only rogues told me storys when the window was open, but the screen still blocked me. Almost got out once." Star said. "I go when I say." She said, darting off to hunt again.

About 3 items were in her small pile about an hour later, she had crossed through a stream, but not into RiverClan.

Star spun around. "Hey! I worked hard to catch those!" She said, trying to sound calm. "This is it?" Star said. "Well. Forgive me for hunting on your land, but I'm not to familiar out here and your borders are very weak." She looked at them, tail dropped. "SO I guess you're gonna make me go back to be a kittypet again."

"Well. I guess you can count on the Leader to make wise choices. But I would be honored." Star said. "I'm Star." She looked away, ears down in respect. "They aren't weak, but another, rogue maybe? May of marked over, there was a scent, but not yours." She said calmly. "I wouldn't make me mad, my temper gets me in trouble alot."

Star followed him. "No hard feelings?" She asked, trotting next to him. "I'm not a kittypet anymore, or a rogue or clan cat."

"Be that way." She growled. Her soft paw steps weren't heard, only except when she stepped on a dry leaf, which was rare.

Star looked at him. "I'm sorry I untruded. Isn't one of the leaders a kittypet? Or was a kittypet?"

Pinepaw rolled his eyes. "There has never been a kittypet here until you came. ThunderClan's different!" he retorted, rolling his eyes.

Star padded along softly, tail held high. "Why are you so against this? Would you rather me leave? That's being selfish."

Olivepaw looked at the she-cat. She smiled. "He's always like that..." she meowed. "I'm O--" she started when she was intrupped by a yowl. "All cats old enough to catch their own prey join here beanth the High-rock for a clan meeting." she yowled. Pinepaw trotted over to the cats group, head and tail held high. Olivepaw looked at Star. "Come."

"Star." She said after the yowl. "OK." Star said, trotting to keep up. "Whats going on?"