A Forcer At Heart

Midnight:I had heard the screams while I was wondering aimlessly, and knew about the evil stallion Zahor. I watch as the mare yells at him him. I laugh to my self "Hun step over here" I tell the little mare. Knowing he wasn't easy to hurt when he was faced head on.

{uhm, she's not cowering from him, more like screaming her head off at him cuz she's no pissed lol}

[sorry :/ ill change that]

~Raven
My eyes widened in disbelief the anger still strong in them. "No!" I snapped. "I am tired of others looking down on me because of my size! Not just physically speaking either!" I rolled my eyes baring my teeth. How many horses could wander around in this Hell hole, nothing-but-dead-trees, of a forest?

{I'm not doing this because I don't like you or your horse [mare, right?], but she's very b*tchy right now, and when she's like that she kinda loses it rofl...}

~Zahor~

I rolled my eyes. "Well I am, and I'm pretty happy with it." I looked at the other horse and grunted. "What now??" I snarled.
My teeth gritted with force and my ears pinned flat against my head as I stared.

My eyes widen, It was Zahor! I pin my ears and snort Zahor, you were banned from here by my father long ago!" I shout at him. I watch him with angry eyes but in my heart I was scared to death of him.

[Did you read where he is?? It doesn't belong to anyone at all, if anyone, Zahor.]

~Zahor~

I rolled my eyes. "Shut up, you ass. This land belongs to no one. If anyone, it should be mine. Even if your father owns it, he'd be pretty stupid to have wanted it. All it is, is burnt down trees that turn to ash at the touch, and rocks that cut your hooves open." I paused and eyed his small frame. "Your brave to approach me like such, let alone come to the mares aid." I looked thoughtful and then added, "Which she doesn't need."

death~"well,well,well what do we have here.."i said with a dangerous voice.i walked out of the shadows and looked at the stallion."zahor."i said with a snort."we kicked you off this land.why have you come back."i said and looked at midnight."you shouldnt have come back here."

pic:

{did either of you read the first post???????! }

~Zahor~

I raised my eyebrows. "And who are you supposed to be?" I stared at the bay horses small frame. The two looked alike. I smirked. "Ahh.. You must be this little kiddo's daddy, right?" I put on a puppy face and then pinned my ears.

{I seriously don't see why people feel the need to jump in on a post when they haven't read the rest of the topic v.v}

~Raven
I watched the stallion come in and snorted. Seriously? What kind of idiots wanted a land to own like this? I already had decided that Zahor was clearly the devil and needed mental help, but what about these two? And the stallion before them? And the mare before even them? I snorted, shaking my head and pawing at the ground, anger still clouding my judgement as I glared at the new stallion.

[Ikr??]

~Zahor~

I glanced at Raven and then turned back to the stallion, waiting for him.

(thats just my pic.) (he is 6 foot 5 inches did you read his bio)

i walk up to the stallion and said "why have you come back.and on i am not a kid and not a daddy.i am a warrior.born to fight."

Nala~
I gently trotted between the trees with caution. My blue eyes and gracefull white coat and mane somewhat stood out in the patches of light. I was hoping to look for a herd of horses to stay with. I was seperated from my mother due to her death. I really wanted to find a safe place to stay. My front right leg was bloody and cut after a close death to a mountain lion. I started to see other horses. Mares and stallions. I am a mare. I whinnied and pawed at the ground hoping they would hear me. I could't quite tell if they had or hadn't. I slowly walked to a small patch of grass and started to graze quietly.

{first of all, you have to make a bio in order to post. Second of all, there is no grass here, she cannot graze. Third of all, if you want her to have a safe place, this is so not the place to be.}

[i read the whole topic btw and I know where you are I meant this area of the whole land my father owns and I didnt mean the entire land. I didn't mean to be a bother so I will leave if you want, I was just replying]

~Zahor~

A look of amusement spread across my face. "I was born here. This is my home. I'm not leaving." I said with a shrug.

Midnight: "The only place you belong is he11 And nowhere else!" I shout at him. "Mares are not meant to please stallions at their wanting!"

~Zahor~

I looked bored and let my shoulders sag. "Why don't you tell me something I don't know?"
My ears flicked foward and my eyes closed. "That's where your wrong. I've met many mares who've wanted it. It's this mare that has the problems."
I gave a small snicker and opened my eyes again. "And apparently so do you."

i stomped the ground and snorted."this is going to end up to a fight."i said and looked at the other mare just standing there then back at the stallion.i pinned my ears back and showed my teeth.

~Zahor~

I rolled my eyes. "Oh give it up, Death. You all know I'd win. I always do."

i reared and hit him in the side."sure you are."i said.

~Zahor~

It would have hit, but I jumped just in time. I felt his sharp hoof scrape some of the fur from my black coat.
I laughed. "Is that all you got?"

"no"i said and bit his neck.and bucked him.

~Raven
I found myself agreeing with the other mare, but now that my anger was gone, my fear was also back, and instead I stood there quietly, shifting uneasily as I listened to the two. The new one, Death, started biting and kicking, and I skittered back away from them, knowing it would probably turn into a fight.